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u + me
Contributed by
anthonymk89
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Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:29:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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U + Me
Is it meant to be?
or is it false emotions?
Was it love or hate?
I truely cared for you,
did you for me?
I wish you cared like i DO.
Sure you called,
but it wasnt enough.
I needed your sweet touch.
After all that we did
you're just gonna quit?
I think you never cared.
U + Me, was good for a while.
then you quit,
on us.
But it wasnt just me,
that you quit on.
It was the start of something good,
the start of u + me...
by: Anthony Killeen 2-15-05
Copyright ©
anthonymk89
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2005-04-04 22:29:27]
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Re: u + me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:39:37 PM AEST
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This was pretty. the rythem and all. The repitition also helps inforce your point. kinda sad though. Nice job!
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Re: u + me
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 10:56:33 PM AEST
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Lovely write...but so sad.
Welcome to YPDC..hope you like it here..
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Re: u + me
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by breny on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:31:06 PM AEST
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nice poem.
I am going through the same thing so I can relate.
nicely done!
~Brenna~ |
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