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Weep
Contributed by
derwydd
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Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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what temporary pleasures
will pass me by?
i care not what is offered,
i turn my eyes
to the artist who wrought me
with only dust.
the breath of life flows through me.
and i know i must
scream with all you've given,
weep for the joy you've granted,
all that was in this earthly will,
the promise you've fullfilled.
i that know you'll always be
ever faithfull.
bestow your blessings on me,
my cup is full.
take away all that you will.
leave only her.
and with all the strength i have
i'll gladly serve.
your grace written upon the sky,
the moon cries your name.
eternity is yours to hold,
life is yours to take.
scream with all you've given,
weep for the joy you've granted,
all that was in this earthly will,
the promise you've fullfilled.
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derwydd
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2002-12-21 06:00:00]
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Re: Weep
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by Sumiko on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 12:24:28 PM AEST
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| Wonderful. I like your style of writting. Slightly abstract with a definate meaning. Good Job! |
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Re: Weep
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by OreO on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 01:05:02 PM AEST
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Wow....tha's all i can say here is wow.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Weep
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by aernby on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 03:39:15 PM AEST
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good write--
a strong statement of strong faitih
well done
-j+ |
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Re: Weep
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 05:08:38 PM AEST
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your faith continues to amaze me.... are these lyrics by any chance? id love to hear the song if so.
thinking of you,
jacey |
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