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Shall I Show You?
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 05:16:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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You cant hold back your screams anymore
I hear them in my head
Im walking on the streets
Watching your impassive way of life
Slowly deteriorate
I see the look s behind your face
The ones that want to be shown
Let me touch your face
Let me feel your skin
Dont run now child
I am not here to hurt you
I am just here to show you
Let me stand next to you
Show you how to feel once more
Not run from the obvious
Nor push it away
But rather pull it in
As far as it will go
Learn from such things
That have made you oh so ill
Copyright ©
Pyrofungus
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2005-04-05 17:16:23]
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Re: Shall I Show You?
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 05:29:02 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful and filled with meaning! awesome job on this one! i loved the message you potrayed and your word choice rocked! |
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Re: Shall I Show You?
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 05:40:20 PM AEST
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A very meaningful piece, and an excellent read. I like it much.
Andrew |
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Re: Shall I Show You?
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:29:19 PM AEST
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absolutly amazing
again
keep up your writes
-->Rae |
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