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Suicidal
Contributed by
xofireangel27
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 07:13:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Scrape, scratch
You try to cut yourself
But the object wasnt sharp enough
Cut, slice
You find a sharper object
And slit your wrist
Drip, drop
The blood drips from your wrists
You start to realize what you did
Tear, sob
You start crying
about all the crap thats been going on
Hope, wish
That someone will come
And help you stop
Scream, shout
You start screaming for help
Someone heard you, and comes.
Truth, lie
You dont know what to tell them
When they ask you what happened
Look, shock
They see the sharp, bloody object next to you
And they start talking to you
Wipe, sob
You wipe the tears from your eyes
And thank the person that talked you out of it
Wounds, scars
You havent cut yourself since
But you still have the scars to remind you of that painful night
Xofireangel27
3/21/05
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2005-04-05 19:13:29]
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Re: Suicidal
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by Kami on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 07:21:03 PM AEST
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| Very deep... but great! Definetly good to sue to explain to a friend not to do that stuff... |
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Re: Suicidal
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by greeneyes on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:36:33 PM AEST
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Detailed very well, hope many read this.
Nancy |
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Re: Suicidal
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by brokengirl on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:32:52 AM AEST
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| very good and relates a lot to my life. thanx for posting. |
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