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Sweet Natomi
Contributed by
TheForgottenMelody
on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 10:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In the confines of a picture
You struck a pose as a victor
In a corner, I stood waiting
With a gift that I was saving
Then I took you by the arm
I protected you from all harm
Except one dear, except one dear
I consumed you in just one fear
Some friend you are
You left me with scars
It's the truth, it's the truth, it's the truth
You broke my heart
Natomi
The only
Sweet Natomi
And I led you to a dark place
All my fingers caressed your face
And I told you how I loved you
But you hurt me and were untrue
It's so sudden how you shined
When my light came from behind
And I bled you, such a red rose
And I dressed you as a ghost
Some friend you were
Do you still stir?
It's a blur, it's a blur, it's a blur
I'm so unsure
Natomi
The only
Sweet Natomi
Copyright ©
TheForgottenMelody
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2005-04-05 22:09:10]
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Re: Sweet Natomi
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 01:22:44 AM AEST
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a sad, emotional and deep write. Hang tuff friend. This was a sad, but very well written piece of poetry. A great poem. Well done
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Sue |
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Re: Sweet Natomi
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by vox on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 03:44:38 PM AEST
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| it is a sad lil' poem but beautiful indeed. touching. keep the good work friend...ill be looking 4ward ... |
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Re: Sweet Natomi
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by Ineedanap on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 02:00:17 AM AEST
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| POwerful and beautiful. Great write |
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