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the tattoo on my neck which means: To Remember
Contributed by
ebooibo
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:31:10 AM in AEST
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i remember:I lay on my bed looking up at the ceiling and i start
reminicing, going back and wondering about my life, why did I travel this
road..... why has it been so rocky? I think about my brothers and why
they had to go, why did God choose me as the survivor and am I facing the
troubles that they should have encountered........ I miss them everyday.
I go further down that road and go deeper into my past and wonder why I
had to go through the things I went through, are they supposed to be
lessons, or are they just evidence of things to come, or could it be
God's way of showing me that I am strong. I put my hand to my neck and
rub it and I remember, I lay on my bed and remember......... I hope it
makes me a better man
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2005-04-06 00:31:10]
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Re: the tattoo on my neck which means: To Remember
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by ebooibo on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:32:50 AM AEST
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| oh this is great keep the good work up lol wow and I'm the one that wrote it lol RIP bro's |
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Re: the tattoo on my neck which means: To Remember
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by Live2Die on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 01:50:11 AM AEST
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| Yes you are the one that wrote it lol, but still. Awesomely amazing poem. |
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Re: the tattoo on my neck which means: To Remember
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:59:38 AM AEST
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this was a beautiful poem..im soo sorry you didnt know ur siblings but you'vre made a great step by writing this poem.
well done |
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Re: the tattoo on my neck which means: To Remember
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 05:31:22 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well. I can't imagene what u feel but hang tuff as u r strong.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy
Keep writing as it's very healing. |
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