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Desperation (Several Haikus)
Contributed by
movax
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:30:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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___________________________
Gun held to my head
Destructive fire all inside
Now's the time to die
___________________________
A tear from your eye
She's not worth all the anguish
Let her be punished
___________________________
Bullets raining down
Dodging death every time
Living for the crime
___________________________
I had a life once
Took my chance and screwed it up
Death my only grace
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2005-04-06 12:30:52]
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Re: Desperation (Several Haikus)
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by PolarBear on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:29:59 PM AEST
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| Your poem was pretty good I liked how you made it. I wish I could write like you do, can you please check out my poem and tell me what you think. The title is BYE. |
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