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the immortal
Contributed by
Keila
on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:34:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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today matters not,
I have many more days left
I cant be old today,
I'll be old next week
my time is like the ocean,
vast and endless it shall be
my body will live forever,
though tourture it will be
though time is slow,
and heart beat fast
My time will be worth its last
if i shall live it must be somthing.
Copyright ©
Keila
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2005-04-06 12:34:20]
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Re: the immortal
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by Unbreakable on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 12:41:32 PM AEST
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Time is an interesting topic to write a poem about as everybody sees it differently. At the same time it is an apparently endless entity. You've done a beautiful on capturing time as you see it and the title fits perfectly...well done
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