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Scars Shadow My Life
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:36:39 PM in AEST
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Scars Shadow My Life
I follow this path of self destruction
With everything that I've thought
Making me realize I'm without the passion
That keeps me from falling apart.
I'm a procreated mistake full of sin,
And I'm too afraid to let anyone in.
I've been broken so many times
That the scars are common place signs
Of the suffocating hate I feel inside
To make me slowly commit suicide.
I'm a poor excuse for a human being,
And my life has lost all meaning.
There's no one holding me back
From letting my soul burn till it's black.
I've tried so hard to find meaning,
But it's all lost with my heart bleeding.
I'm not going to be here for much longer anymore,
Since I've let down everyone I used to live for.
I've reached the end of this path of self destruction,
And the mistakes I've done weigh on my thoughts.
Nothing is worth living for without passion,
And nothing stops me from falling apart.
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Re: Scars Shadow My Life
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:43:55 PM AEST
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Oh my dear friend. U must let go of this self defeating, negative attitude. You are a good person and great poet. I write to live and live to write.
Life is hard it's true but we luv u here and it doesn't matter what you've done. Our luv is unconditional so please realize this and grab life and go with it. If I didn't take meds then I would have given up long ago.
I will pray for u.
Promise me u will try. We don't wonna loose u.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace, prayer,
emy
P.m. me any time. |
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Re: Scars Shadow My Life
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:46:42 PM AEST
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What ever u have or have not done, u have
written a beautiful poem, sad yes, but we r
all richer for it, and that the best reason 4
having some one like u in this world, if that's
a poor excuse, then we should have more of
them . . . Dorian Chambers
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Re: Scars Shadow My Life
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by xtremcalibur on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:59:52 PM AEST
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| You should see your poetry as we have. A brilliant display of words. Feeling the pain as we follow your write shows us that you still have passion. It comes through very clearly. Your words reflect the very passion you deny. Look for the child in you and live life with opened eyes. Don't isolate yourself because darkness tends to manifest itself during those times. Thank you for sharing so beautiful words. |
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Re: Scars Shadow My Life
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:42:31 PM AEST
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eh....Jen.....this is just......um..well...how do I say it.....?...let me see...??????????????? GREAT
as always
Clark |
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Re: Scars Shadow My Life
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by venkat on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:26:53 AM AEST
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Oh..Jennifer..feelings almost from an abyss..
Heart tearing. :-)venkat |
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Re: Scars Shadow My Life
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by pixie on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 02:02:32 PM AEST
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this sounds like something I would write. very well expressed. deep and soul bearing. hope that you can find a smile in your heart *hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: Scars Shadow My Life
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by fielding88 on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:24:14 PM AEST
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| What a moving piece, speaking to me on so many different levels, and a conclusion with such wisdom behind it. The conclusion Ive made from reading it, however, is that if you're able to so skillfully write about this kind of emotion, passion is more than abundant. Then again...what do I know? I taste poetry... :P But I loved this nevertheless. |
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Re: Scars Shadow My Life
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:17:12 PM AEST
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Jen, what a poetic sad write. A lovely combination that alaways work for the effect im sure you're after. I loved this well done.
Jane |
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Re: Scars Shadow My Life
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:46:48 PM AEST
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| a little spider that makes a web so beautiful that you want to be apart of it and then when your really in it.. the web tangles around you and the spider says i got you. then you say your sorry. turn your head and walk a different way and dont let the spider come back at you and remind you of what you did. you said your sorry. you change to go a different way and tell the spider that you crushed him by doing so and he cant bother you anymore unless you let him.. DONT let him. great write. |
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