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You Saw Me
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 09:55:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I felt so lost
I felt so sad
Like no one cared
I would often cry
I would often hide inside my room
And blare my music so none could hear me threatening myself
For so long I was invisible
To my family
To my classmates
To myself
Then I noticed you
You were smiling so brilliantly
You stood and said hi to me
I was shocked
You saw me
No one looked in our direction
And for a minute I felt normal
As If everything was okay
You and I talk alot since then
And I can't forget the look you gave me
Now I have friends
And I am seen
But no one is as dear to me as you are, My first friend
We can talk to eachother and we can listen to eachother
But one thing I can never say
I love you
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2005-04-06 21:55:57]
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Re: You Saw Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:33:55 PM AEST
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| nice write.i felt that that once im so sorry good write |
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