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Horizon
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:46:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears pour from these blood shot eyes My heart aching from the piercing knife My pain rising within myself My soul heavy from this burdened life Cold and dark is my grief never-ending Concealed are my many sorrows My intuition forever in exile My screams weak and voice hollow Looking into the mirror again I shatter the reflection I see Realizing through my disarray I cant even recognize me Trying to escape my banishment so vile My bruised knees I am weeping Murderous is this curse so cruel From my wrists I see the blood seeping I look up into the starry night sky Searching for some kind of revival The moon disappearing, the sky awakens Praying for my survival Opening my eyes for what seems the first time Crying away all that Ive done And now Im finally feeling free Running blindly into the horizon
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Re: Horizon
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:45:19 PM AEST (User
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Very well done but I found a little sad! It sounds like you are depressed in this,Your true feelings really came out. I hope youre ok now. Christina |
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Re: Horizon
(User Rating: 1 ) by SylviaWalters on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 03:25:22 AM AEST (User
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I really like this poem, because it is quite easy to relate to it. Well done, and I truely hope things get better soon. |
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Re: Horizon
(User Rating: 1 ) by maestar on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 10:33:09 AM AEST (User
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Great poem.
loved it.
you've got a real talent |
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