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I Can See
Contributed by
JacobsKK
on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 09:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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If we are still together,
By the time Im twenty-one.
Still hand in hand until that time,
Still watching setting suns.
And if you still make up my thoughts,
Still the one Im dreaming of.
Id take time from each day to make sure,
You know youre the one I love.
I can picture that aisle,
And I can see you in your suit.
It still feels easy to love you,
I can hear me say, I Do.
I can even imagine our house,
With all the pictures in the hall.
Wedding photos glancing back,
From where they hang on the wall.
And if I happen to survive
By the time Im twenty-three.
I swear that Id give you a kid,
Even if the birth killed me.
Then, by the age of 30,
When family photos rest in their frames.
Id still have ways of proving,
That I love you just the same.
I can see the intimate moments,
As if they are already here.
I can feel me missing you,
Whenever you cant be near.
I can even hear me screaming,
As the petty fights have grown.
But a relationship is healthy,
When a few vases are thrown.
Then the making up will come,
Something itll always do.
Even then, at thirty five,
I will still love you.
Then when our kid graduates,
By the time Im forty-one.
He might move away, but well
Still have our setting suns.
Im fifteen, but I can see all of this,
Its something so easy to do.
But I dont think itll ever be,
As easy as loving you.
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JacobsKK
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2005-04-07 21:14:56]
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Re: I Can See
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:16:52 PM AEST
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in this one your rhythum develops very nicely
your only 15? by the time your 21u better have
a book out u r good . . .
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