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she's a mess, she's a mess
Contributed by
IMissYouTerribley
on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:27:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Shes a mess, shes a mess
Bruises on her thighs
Slashed hip bones
Scars on her wrists
Shes a mess, shes a mess
Porcelain skin
Hollowed in eyes
A blank stare
Shes a mess, shes a mess
Empty stomach
Vomit hidden
Theres a voice inside her head
Shes a mess, shes a mess
The highs are so extreme
The lows are so severe
The silence is piercing
Shes a mess, shes a mess
All the stories
All the lies
Dont believe her
Shes a mess, shes a mess
Shes running
Shes falling
Shes dying
Please dont let her shatter
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Re: she's a mess, she's a mess
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:09:58 PM AEST
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| This is awsome. The repetition helped a lt in creating the poem, though the last line seems a little out of place. otherwise, very nicely done. |
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Re: she's a mess, she's a mess
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by Whisper on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:40:25 PM AEST
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That write made me stop in my tracks. Wow its very powerful. nuff said Keep writing III be looking for ya
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Re: she's a mess, she's a mess
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by heartless_soul on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:54:52 PM AEST
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| "I thought I commented on this when you posted it...sorry." this was a very touching poem and it speacks so true, (for those who do cause self-harm) yes it is like this and I hope that this is just you writing but if it isnt then I hope that you will get over you suffering soon. this was a good poem and if flowed well I do hope that you are able to write about other stuff as well and if so I wounld like to read it soon. Be well. |
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