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Welcome to my life
Contributed by
tinkerhell
on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:41:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Welcome to the world I see
Sit back and enjoy
through the eyes of me.
Hello all, today I'll be the guide
so listen closely and please
keep both hands at your side.
And when a question comes to mind
if you could save it till the end
that'd be so very kind.
So here as we start, I'll try not cry
as I take you through my life
each smile and every sigh.
Copyright ©
tinkerhell
... [
2005-04-07 23:41:52]
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Re: Welcome to my life
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by xtremcalibur on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 05:35:36 AM AEST
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| Perfect ~ but where's the story? *Winks* I liked it just the way it is. Everything just went as it should. I read your piece and then abruptly you ended. Kind of left in the air. Was this your intent? Good write though. Wish there was more. |
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