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LOVE BEGINS
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:20:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Fantasies awaken
sleeping hearts arise
bridled tongues unleashed
A single touch,a moments glance
the stars brighten
the moon now aglow
Roaming fingers,trembling hands
heaven filled kisses
ecstasy unfolds
Making love,memories
loves essence fills the air
Now to dream my sweet
bask pleasantly in the love shared
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
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2005-04-08 13:20:17]
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Re: LOVE BEGINS
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:22:11 PM AEST
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| Good poem. SLipSiX. |
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Re: LOVE BEGINS
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by reflections on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 06:59:47 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, in the style of a memoir, allowing the poem to open as slowly as morning flowers shaking off the dew before displaying the beauty of their bloom. Not as sensual as it is a loving feeling shared between two in love. Good writing from a talented writer.
Cheers
John
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