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Dreaming
Contributed by
Mesano
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Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:13:06 PM in AEST
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I sit alone, thinking of you... I walk alone, unknowing what to do...
Whats a little distance? Whats a few short years? But is all of the madness, Worth just a few small tears?
I sit alone, I walk alone... Dreaming of you... Dreaming of that special kiss, Dreaming of you...
Whats a little distance? Whats a few more years? The madness taking over, Filling me with fears.
Wondering what fate has in store... And wondering, makes me wonder more...
I'm tired of always bein alone, I want more than just those dreams, I want that have that special kiss, To have my dreams come true...
...I want you...
Just a little distance, Just a few more years, Don't know whats gonna happen, But I can't give in to fears...
If it's meant, it will be, But that we cannot see...
Just a little distance, Just a few more years... Tired of the madness, Tired of the fears...
I'll always wonder, until we know... If you were meant for me...
...I want you...
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Re: Dreaming
(User Rating: 1 ) by Phantomdream on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:51:47 PM AEST (User
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Pertiful......I like it. Reading it it seemed more like a poem than a song. No offense, stick with poetry.... |
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Re: Dreaming
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mesano on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:53:42 PM AEST (User
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no offense taken lol... its just not anything like my usual poems and i was kinda singing it as i wrote rather than saying it... but yeah i like the idea of stickin to poetry lol :) |
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Re: Dreaming
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cupid on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 09:05:41 PM AEST (User
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I can see this as a song.
I bet it would sound good. : )
Don't worry about it, Mesano, all songs are poetry.
So it really doesn't matter if you think you're better at poetry than at songs.
Because of what I said before.
Songs = Poems.
Poems = Songs.
Keep it up, Mesano. You're a great poet and lyricist. : ) |
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Re: Dreaming
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:15:50 PM AEST (User
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This is really beautiful... hope your dream comes true..
Jenni |
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