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Floating
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:23:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Floating
Wondering
Pretending
I was
Drifting away
Floating as light as a feather
Gently floating on
Carrying me away
Off to the great wave
of fresh
clean
cool
peacefulness
The great suns ray
Warming my transparent Spirit
Now lifted and free
To go and be
Whom ever I please
Ever too Soon
Gently
I will fall back
As small drops of rain
Always do
Back to the ground and Good Mother Earth
Whisper
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Whisper
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2005-04-08 23:23:25]
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Re: Floating
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by Dralion on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:36:27 PM AEST
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| How wonderfully etheral:) |
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Re: Floating
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by Spike on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 07:14:04 AM AEST
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Adult poetry more than children's I think. I could feel myself floating away on the words...................
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