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That Night
Contributed by
AtomicPromIse
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Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:26:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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That night,
Around eight or nine,
You came wobbling up to my door,
Like that little goblin that you are,
You stood on my porch,
Till I heard you breathing,
That loud noise you used to make,
Quite disturbing and kind of funny,
I sat by the door,
Ear up against it,
Waiting for you to leave,
Then knock, knock, knock
I rolled my eyes,
As I cracked open the door,
You hunched over,
With tears,
Panting,
You carved my name into your arm,
Hugged me, bleeding!
Why did you run away AGAIN?
Why did you run away to me?
I sat there next to you,
You telling me I love you,
Oh! Youre so insane!
And I couldnt leave your side,
Youd grab another knife,
But believe me that was what I always wanted to do.
Just go! But I couldnt let you threaten to take your life,
Id feel so guilty.
I tried to convince you to let me take you home,
But you said Im going, going far away from here.
Will you wait for me, Ill be back in a few years
I laughed, John, youre funny
And then you agreed to go home,
But ran from the car,
Why did you come back?
You made me sooooo angry,
I wanted to punch you in the face,
So you finally got in the car,
But why were you hesitant to get out?
I wouldve pushed you out,
But you got out on your own,
I never wanted to talk to you again,
My life was miserable,
And you wanted to marry me,
Tell you what! That never would have happened,
Even if I did say yes,
Im just glad that night is over,
As well as all the other nights I spent with you.
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AtomicPromIse
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2005-04-08 23:26:04]
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Re: That Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:31:07 PM AEST
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| eep...that would just...freak me out. as for the poem, it has an unsteady rythem, but otherwise, really good. |
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Re: That Night
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by sick_n_twisted on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 11:35:28 PM AEST
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| well in my opinion the guy is sorta sweet not really that crazy haha seems sweet n a weird way nice write |
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Re: That Night
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by hellsfallenangel on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 03:48:00 PM AEST
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its good but the wy its written made it little confusing to read
DEMON |
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