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Your unheard prayer...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 10:03:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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As I lay snuggled deeply asleep
My heart emerges and begins to float
Amidst the star studded sky
Riding on a robust clouded boat
Up into the shiny starry night
Where dreams are cast in prayer
I hear every single whispered one
As I get closer to heaven's golden layer
One heartfelt prayer
That I couldn't help but over hear
Was that of your anguished prayer
Asking God to hold you near
So I take this heartfelt prayer
That's wrapped with pain and tears
I help guide it to make its way to heaven
Because to me you are so dear
My heart slowly descends the starry night sky
Back into my body as I sleep safe and sound
But before my heart headed towards Earth's shores
I made sure your prayer was found and it knocked on
heaven's doors...
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mina-1
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2005-04-09 10:03:12]
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Re: Your unheard prayer...
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by Apolla on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 10:55:03 AM AEST
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| This poem literally took my breath away. The only thing I can say is it was beautiful, everything flowed beautifully, excellent choice of words, and keep writing! |
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Re: Your unheard prayer...
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by Kie on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:57:32 PM AEST
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This hit me in the heart.
It just moved me so deeply and so powerfully that I fought tears.
It is your absolute best. My favorite.
Kie |
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Re: Your unheard prayer...
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 01:12:56 AM AEST
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AMAZING! LIKE AN OUTTER EXPERIENCE,
BUT FROM THE INNER PROPERTIES OF YOUR GREAT HEART!! YOUR DREAMS SAIL FROM HEAVEN TO EARTH & BACK AGAIN,
ALL FOR THE PLEASURE OF DELIVERING THE PRAYER OF A FRIEND!!! nuff said!!!!
P.S.-I LOVED IT!!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: Your unheard prayer...
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:14:21 PM AEST
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| a poem worth being proud of sue, but surely you knew this already. excellent ending. i love endings that are so good they are worth the read even in themselves. |
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Re: Your unheard prayer...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 03:30:09 AM AEST
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Wow Sue this is a heavenly masterpeice. So beautifull, touching and very deep with the luv of a child of God behind it.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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