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Entangled Fakes
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 03:44:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Make up your god damn mind!
Your my best friend
And then I'm a loser
You're driving me round the bend
That's how it all started
How all of this began
Those stupid fakes called
And you stupidly ran
You became entangled
In the sinister truth
I knew I had to help
When I heard you crying on the roof
When you found out
That you'd been used
How painfully and cruelly
You'd been abused
I cried for you
That cold bitter night
You were slipping under
Losing sight
Sight and Judgement
That is all you lost
You gained nothing
Still payed the cost
But if only I had said something
If only I'd tried
Before you took it out on yourself
Before you died...
Copyright ©
Dying_Angel
... [
2005-04-09 15:44:05]
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Re: Entangled Fakes
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by Kie on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:45:01 PM AEST
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The ending was a shocker and I honestly don't know how to comment on this poem.
Its very powerful.
Kie |
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Re: Entangled Fakes
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 10:58:30 PM AEST
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wow, great write.
=jen= |
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Re: Entangled Fakes
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:12:13 PM AEST
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| .....it makes sence..sry thats the best i can say 4 now |
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Re: Entangled Fakes
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:12:40 PM AEST
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| .....it makes sence..sry thats the best i can say 4 now |
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