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Stolen Smile
Contributed by
KishaLovesCare126
on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:39:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
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4/9/2005, 23:33Pm
A girl I know
With a beautiful smile
Cant walk out the door
Wont walk a mile
Some where she is broken
Her laughter is gone for the moment.
Theres a cloud above her head
Its raining on her soul
Soaking up her dreams
Feelings she cant let free
Her heart tonight is empty
The love I know theres plenty.
Sunshine is bright
Still she doesnt shine
Once a sparkle in her eyes
It has now begun to slip by
With wind in her face
It just wont flow.
Her smile has been stolen, the crook better return it
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KishaLovesCare126
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2005-04-10 00:39:18]
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Re: Stolen Smile
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 01:14:23 AM AEST
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I thought this was really good except the last
line didn't really fit with the rest of the poem.
Overall I thought this was a beautiful poem
written to what seems like a beautiful person.
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Re: Stolen Smile
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:47:09 AM AEST
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Great poem, I feel you . I have felt this way .
Hugs,
Leia |
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