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Rent Your Life
Contributed by
nos_bunny
on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:24:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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This path was unchoosen, The path we call fate,
The uncalled visions, The time was too late.
A rule we were given, A gift we use,
Our freedom now taken, Although we don't choose.
Take it from me, Give me in return,
A death from your kiss, Rain falls when you burn.
I cry, I pray, I challenge death,
I stumble and hold my long last breath,
Why do I keep loosing, Why have you read,
All my poems mean life, After your dead.
Its pointless, Its meaningless, Its your obsession,
A re-write of reality in my possession.
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nos_bunny
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2005-04-10 12:24:02]
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Re: Rent Your Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:04:33 PM AEST
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| I don't know why no one has commented on this. It's a powerful write. The rhyming couplets are great, the last two being my favorites. Keep writing! |
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