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Voices
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 04:49:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I awake to find that we are not free,
Slaves to reality,
Puppets to the media,
Whores to hate,
Ripped open, bled out till theres nothing left,
Except the resonating melody of emptiness
I feel it taking over,
The voices grow louder,
Endless repetition,
The same damn song they always shriek
You are nothing Succumb to us Kill for us again
So many have died,
Bt the touch of these tainted hands,
And how can anyone understand,
The complexity and madness,
Of an insane mind?
The mindless litany of a silent poet?
Live a life of feigned happiness,
Fake a smile for the camera,
Show your tears to no one
Tell yourself everything is alright,
Pretend you have friends,
Even if you cannot see them
Caught in the corners of my mind,
Darkness dwells, taking all that is mine,
The last of my blissful memories,
Leaving only thoughts of death
The demons smell my fear,
I know I will lose this time
Slowly eating my sanity away,
The true beast within will surface,
And all shall perish
Do not ignore The Voices within,
For they are the voices of Reason,
And they will get their way
Do not avert your gaze from what is in front of you,
For in your nightmares,
I am all that will haunt you
Do not fear the darkness,
For in death,
That is all there is
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-04-10 16:49:59]
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Re: Voices
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 06:36:58 PM AEST
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heh, awsomely written. i can totally relate to this. very nicely done.
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Re: Voices
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:02:55 PM AEST
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"Ripped open, bled out till there’s nothing left,
Except the resonating melody of emptiness…"
This whole poem was just so damn good,
but those two lines in particular really stood
out to me. Yeah you continually astound me
with the depth of your poetry never stop
writing because that would be tragic.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Voices
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:49:50 PM AEST
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That was amazing i especially loved the last stanza:
Do not fear the darkness,
For in death,
That is all there is…
thats awesome....great write...excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: Voices
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:40:16 AM AEST
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A treat 2 the sences as always your beauty
in these words touch all that is in need of an
understanding and nurturing soul as only you
can be, divine poem from the pen of an
artistic angel . . . **********
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Voices
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 02:34:30 PM AEST
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| Just the title had me clicking to read, which I'm glad I did. These words show great depth of the lingering voices we have all probably heard at some point in our life. This was exceptionally penned and an awesome read. I could relate to every last word. Thanks for sharing this.~joni~ |
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Re: Voices
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:35:52 PM AEST
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" Pretend you have friends,
Even if you cannot see them… "
* Jumping up and down waving arms frantically ... *
Here I am Stephy !!!! Can you see me now ?
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Voices
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 01:32:14 PM AEST
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| A really dark poem that I marked to comment on. I find it a slightly cynical write, and if that's what you meant to portray you did a good job of it. We all have these given personas in us and I'd guess that the ones we give a voice to at any certain moment is sometimes a choice process and sometimes not. *hugs* J. |
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