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Simple things
Contributed by
Whisper
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Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 06:03:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Simple Its all quite simple As plain as the nose on your face As plain as the day is long Forever looking for the betterment of man kind Simple but not close enough But closer then the the coming of the next blue moon Thoughts in passing Simple things for Simple questioning minds.
Whisper
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Re: Simple things
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dreama on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:11:30 PM AEST (User
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interesting bit of fluff there ;)
i looked @ this cos of the reference to simple things!
i liked it! peace and respect!
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Re: Simple things
(User Rating: 1 ) by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:31:28 AM AEST (User
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Not fluffy if you asked me. : )
"Thoughts in passing" are rarely as simple as they seem. They are rather like planted seeds, I think.... their true beauty, perhaps, not revealing itself until some time later.
Yes... I like this one.
Keep writing,
~SNM~ |
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