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My complex experiences
Contributed by
ebooibo
on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:12:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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life for me is a crazy thing, so many complex experiences it can
bring
i don't understand the feelings omitted from my very own soul
don't comprehend my desires, feels like i've lost control
my heart aches for something, yet not obtained
but the funny thing is how will i recognize this thing once it comes my
way?
I can be so blind to the sights set out before me
yet observe things impalpable, things not real
so how can i even come to explain these words, what i truly feel?
if i don't know what hurts me, how can i know how to heal?
so many things compressed into one mind,
so many burdens imposed on this heart of mine
just hope to acknowledge my breaking point
soon before it's time...
Copyright ©
ebooibo
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2005-04-10 21:12:59]
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Re: My complex experiences
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by spazz911 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:15:31 PM AEST
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| that is soo...true |
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Re: My complex experiences
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:13:58 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
Jus take it one day at a time and one problem at a time.
One day you will look back and realize u have conquered your quest.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: My complex experiences
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:36:42 PM AEST
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| Wow! thats all i have to say! great poem..i would love to see you keep writing. |
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