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Summer Day
Contributed by
bittersweet315
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Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 03:21:18 PM in AEST
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oops
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So just relax
look at that sky
such a bright, entrancing blue
with clouds like cotton balls
scattered across it all.
leaves of green from the tallest trees
frame the perfect sky.
beams of sunlight
hitting my face, warming my body.
feel that grass
cushioning me as i simply lay.
mixed up in my fingers, which
occasionally uproot tiny blades.
smell that air.
so crisp, fresh, warm...
listen.
listen to the quiet motions
surrounding me.
feel a soft breeze
gently tickling my face.
so just relax.
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bittersweet315
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2005-04-11 15:21:18]
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Re: Summer Day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:35:02 PM AEST
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| I loved this. Made me feel like i was there. Thanks for sharing. Shey |
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Re: Summer Day
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 05:37:36 PM AEST
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Maybe I caught an undertone in the poem that isn't there, but I found it interesting that the author painted an idillic word picture of a relaxing and warm place, but had to tell him or herself to relax...as if the author couldn't relax.
Really interesting piece...I found it a good read. |
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