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Breath the Silence
Contributed by
lostlove
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Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 04:20:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Who are you
Do I know you
You speak, I hear
Yet nothing is real
Tell me who you are
To whom do I speak
Your life, a false
Your voice, silent
Be you, be me
A false world
Be the truth of a life
Of misery and hate
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2005-04-11 16:20:08]
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Re: Breath the Silence
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 05:25:18 PM AEST
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| this is really intense. i love it, and i think the length is just right, some people try to force length, but this is really good. |
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