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Once Upon A Time
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
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Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 05:13:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Once upon a time
When the Earth was not stained with blood
The world was beautiful
Man live side by side
And worked in harmony with his brother
What happened to that world?
Lust, greed, hatred
All blossomed among the men
And soon they found themselves strangling their own brother
With their bare hands
They found murder as a high
Killing, betraying, sheading the blood of their own children
On to the precious Earth
Staining it forever
Not caring who they squashed
To get more
They world will never be the same again
The Earth will never breath again
Without the smell of blood
Copyright ©
DesolantDreamer
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2005-04-11 17:13:43]
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Re: Once Upon A Time
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by reflections on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 08:23:26 AM AEST
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So, the truth is known; you are not a dark poet . . . you are a realist with a keen eye that recognizes evil and dishonesty, and have the heart and the words to expose it. Quite a task for the times in which we live. However, do not forget that in that same world there does still exist love, compassion, and wisdom. You, being a seeker, will find that to be true if you search long enough. Be successful my little friend. Your happiness depends on it. Wonderful writing.
Cheers
John
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Re: Once Upon A Time
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:29:53 PM AEST
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this is amazing. the world today is portrayed so well....so realistically. it's amazing how bad things are.
great write
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