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I Left My Life Somewhere In The Overlap
Contributed by
girltranscended
on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 10:25:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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For eight long years
weve been birds
with broken wings.
Great Blue Herons
who stand tall
but are not proud.
We are those silent
solitary animals
in coves by ourselves,
flapping overlapping feathers,
soft and fine
and gray as fog.
For eight long years
weve been birds
with broken wings
a half a mile from the other
with our backs turned.
On long, thin legs
we have waited and
waded through so much.
We are broken
and useless
there on that left side.
And we are not done
being weary and
are wary all the time.
Great Blue Herons
who are tall
but not proud
in coves by ourselves
flapping overlapping feathers.
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Re: I Left My Life Somewhere In The Overlap
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by electrique_poet on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:25:59 AM AEST
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incredible, this was a great read, these words create such a large picture in the color of emotion, it takes time to fully view but is quite beautiful
... in words electrique |
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Re: I Left My Life Somewhere In The Overlap
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:16:51 PM AEST
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| oooooooo i like this. its so cool with this...not nobal nobility. i respect the humble most of all. i dunno i like the feelin it gives me. great stoof =D |
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Re: I Left My Life Somewhere In The Overlap
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:53:43 AM AEST
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First, great images and definately with a message here.
Second, I love the way you cleverly used the play on words in the middle of the stanzas.
Oh so well done! |
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Re: I Left My Life Somewhere In The Overlap
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:18:05 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is beautiful! I love it! |
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