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You And I Simply Can Never Be
Contributed by
jyssvw
on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 10:59:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Hanging pictures on their frame
Main Street deserted for the parade
They dance and sing in your honor
They pay homage to your courageous valor
You are officially a hero of epic proportions
You and your little shiny suit of armor, take caution
Sword drawn and mask fastened tight
Take your stage, warrior of the night
Its your words they wait to hear
Its your poetry that can induce their last tear
For I have been here, waiting for your return
I thought it better then simply coming along
Children gather, they chant your name
They dress like you
Its such a crying damn shame!
If they only knew you
The way I once used to do
If they only loved you
If they only gave a damn too!
Bestowed upon you, is an honor such
Kings and Gods awake, just to wish you luck!
Have I sinned to such an extent,
That all I have accomplished is irrelevant?
Has the road I traveled become nonexistent?
Was my toil and hardship worth even some small percent?
But I digress, this here is your special day
Youre larger than the sun, in your own perverted way
Compounding conclusions, and drastic disillusions
Have enabled a condemned slave of misery
Rise to the lauded and worshiped epitome-
Greatness and prominence have apparently escaped thee
You and I simply, can never be
Copyright ©
jyssvw
... [
2005-04-11 22:59:03]
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Re: You And I Simply Can Never Be
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:25:13 AM AEST
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| That is a great poem! I love your use of good grammar and vocabulary! This poem deserves a two-thumbs up! Jenny |
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Re: You And I Simply Can Never Be
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by unforgiven on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:58:24 AM AEST
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this is excellent! love how u express ur ideas and imagery in this poem and also ur grammer and speech.
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Re: You And I Simply Can Never Be
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by JacobsKK on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:49:15 PM AEST
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| WOw, this is touching too. As usual you have written another masterpiece. Great write. |
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