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Forgotten
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:24:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Alone and unwelcome
I stand on the street
Ran away from my house
Yet cant move my feet
Afraid of unacceptance
Hate fills my empty soul
My body goes numb
As I stand in the cold
If I scream out for help
Will anyone hear me?
But the whole world is blinded
By the darkness they cant see
I am unwanted and unknown
Forgotten by all
And now by myself
I choose to fall
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Re: Forgotten
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by Jaycee on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:42:21 AM AEST
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| Raw and powerful, this speaks to my heart. I am touched by your sadness and only want to put my virtual arms around you and hold you close. |
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Re: Forgotten
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:00:46 PM AEST
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It's sad... but good.. very good
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Re: Forgotten
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:40:01 PM AEST
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"I choose to fall"
i love that line.
this has a helplessness that i like. so good... keep writing!
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Re: Forgotten
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:01:53 PM AEST
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Jenny, i will hear you I will come to ur aid, I will always be there 4 u, no matter wat u think.
Ps this poem is shorter than the others |
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Re: Forgotten
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:23:20 AM AEST
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| I like this peom and how your lost in it.....theirs so many times in my life right now I stop and feel lost with out hope...thank you for writing tihis poem I enjoyed your work. |
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