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*~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
Contributed by
Rxqueen
on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:41:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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glitter and gasoline
They don't love your sparkle anymore
they all see that you're just a whore
they don't want to feel the burn
no baby, now it is your turn
You sit there so serene
do you understand what i meen
have you figured out
there's no use to pout?
Glitter and gasoline
you are no beauty queen
your imaginary tiara has been ripped off
now at your vulnerability we all scoff
You were never who we wanted you to be
you were just eye candy for us to see
a dissapointent to say the least
on our temporary ignorance your sickness did feast
You thought you had the world in a jar
that we'd never find out you really are
(no shining star, just a fading scar)
but glitter you wash away quick
and gasoline your fire will burn out like a wick
So sit down drama queen
you may be glitter and gasoline
but you can no longer fake that smile
you can no longer live in denial
The pain you keep is to great to hide
and we are no longer along for the ride
you can try to choke back those tears
that been hiding behind fake eyelashes all these years
But we see you naked here tonight
no need to put up a fight
give up and give in
you are destroyed outside and within
So now baby throw away your dream
you are nothing but glitter and gasoline
washing away in your own tears
burnt out by you own fears
You've lost all your pawns in your deceitful game
glitter and gasoline... what a shame.
Copyright ©
Rxqueen
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2005-04-12 22:41:28]
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by bigtig6269 on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:58:56 PM AEST
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| .......wow. great poem. what exactly do you mean by glitter and gasoline? I see where you're coming from. Love the rhyme scheme and the content. Keep up the work |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:49:24 PM AEST
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Wow!! What a great poem. So from the heart, I feel you and think this is beautiful and sad but with hope
Thankyou for sharing this
Hugs
Leia |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 01:28:58 AM AEST
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| very interesting..:-) venkat |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 01:53:07 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
No one has the right to lable anyone else.
Great writing.
Hang tuff, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 02:16:24 AM AEST
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I've always admired you're honesty when it comes to your poems.
I really liked this sort a part 2, and yet it's only a conclusion of a never ending story.
You were never who we wanted you to be
you were just eye candy for us to see
a dissapointent to say the least
on our temporary ignorance your sickness did feast
I loved that part the best, i've been thru that and i know what you meant.
Jane |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 06:48:48 AM AEST
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wow so honest .
great job. |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:17:09 PM AEST
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Beautifly written course i don't agree lol, and
u know this of course, however ugly your veiw
your heart is in the right place poetry beauty &
love straight from the heart via the soul . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:56:33 PM AEST
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Hey Joce,
I liked this one as much as the first...they are so raw and so captivating..I especially liked this stanza:
So now baby throw away your dream
you are nothing but glitter and gasoline
washing away in your own tears
burnt out by you own fears
I thought the words were perfect and the flow was wonderful.
Chin up Jocelyn! It does get better.
Carol |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:03:36 PM AEST
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| Very truthful adn tradgic. Well done |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 03:49:12 AM AEST
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Wow...
Like a punch in the face, your work is!
That was rather Bold...powerful...energetic.
A sequel to Glitter and Gasoline?
Very effective!
Great work! |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 06:44:28 AM AEST
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You are an excellent writer,
you simply kick @$$.
I'm glad to be reminded you have
a real talent.
And better still it's real cool stuff,
not the kind of pretentious wordy bs
some snobs think is the only kind of poetry.
--Ghosty |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 01:01:27 AM AEST
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| Such a strong poem sweet one. I loved it just like the first. The ending is sad, but the poem holds truth. I'm here for you always!!! |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:58:35 AM AEST
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"The pain you keep is to great to hide
and we are no longer along for the ride
you can try to choke back those tears
that been hiding behind fake eyelashes all these years"
Wow what a stanza and a poem in general. I
didn't get the part about the gasoline, but I
thought this was a very melancholy poem but
I hope it allowed you to expunge some
tormenting thoughts. I hope you are feeling
better than you were before.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: *~*Glitter & Gasoline*~* The Break Down
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by RainDancer2005 on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 05:06:54 PM AEST
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Sad, truthful, but a really great poem!!
Robin
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