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Tears Of A Clown
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 01:28:12 PM in AEST
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I have seen the tears of a clown,
In them I have lost my breath & drown,
As they fall they cascade all around,
Silently splashing onto the ground.
Creating an unhappy little river,
Out of her eyes like snakes they slither,
Caressing her face as they flow,
Kissing her skin as they fall down so slow.
She has lived a life of misery,
Feeling caged, never knowing of free,
Crying is the only thing that fills her days,
Forever in her heart the sadness stays.
She lets out a sigh as she quietly sits,
Knowing that in the world her face never fits,
Being alone carries her day into a restless night,
In the dark she holds onto her pillow tight.
Wishing that the pillow was a lover,
Then at least shed have some cover,
From the hurt & the pain she endures,
Heartache flows freely from her pores.
The tears of a clown fall down my face,
Only I live in this desolate place,
I sit with silence as thats my only friend,
I just wish someone had an ear or shoulder to lend.
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pixie
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Re: Tears Of A Clown
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 01:35:39 PM AEST
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Oh Pix hun this makes me so sad your wrote with such conviction and honesty a flowing poem of hurt and pain. Im here if you want to chat raindancermyst is my yahoo ID
hugsssss
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Re: Tears Of A Clown
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:24:17 PM AEST
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What a sad sad write, emotions are writen so well with such conviction.
I really felt the intensity of this, well writen as always.
Jane |
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Re: Tears Of A Clown
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:56:42 AM AEST
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Wow your words made this poem come alive
it was achingly beautiful and just tore me to shreds. I'm not really sure what else to say.
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Re: Tears Of A Clown
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 05:00:30 AM AEST
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aw pixie
this is such a sad write, i can really feel it.
Wishing that the pillow was a lover,
Then at least she’d have some cover,
From the hurt & the pain she endures,
Heartache flows freely from her pores.
was me last night
i loved your poem
miss nattering to you
love hx |
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Re: Tears Of A Clown
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by venkat on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 06:52:54 AM AEST
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I feel "this is achingly beautiful" ..and I am deeply moved when you compare tears to snakes slither caressing on the face..and heartache flows freeely from her pores..
How sad this is.. hugs my dear friend:-) venkat |
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Re: Tears Of A Clown
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 01:34:43 AM AEST
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Excellent
I think you and I are in the same sad circus
of bouncing off balanced clowns.
The Wind.... |
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Re: Tears Of A Clown
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by Kevin on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:09:45 PM AEST
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a very sad write, altho i greatly enjoyed it, i have to say it was very sad....Sometimes u just need to be happy, smile a lil bit, go w/what life gives u....if life hands u a lemon, make lemonade, and if life hands u vodka...throw a party :-)
Smile hun, everything'll be alright
-Kevin |
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