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No Hope
Contributed by
tonsil
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:58:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As I draw this blade
Across my skin
Zoning out of reality
My pain within
Drips down to the ground
Not making a sound
Drowning in tears
Left to be cried
Stuck in this vortex
No exit sign
No energy to hope with
Failure is mine
Screaming out for help
But nobody hears
In self despair
Broken are my gears
Copyright ©
tonsil
... [
2005-04-13 16:58:08]
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Re: No Hope
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 09:02:09 AM AEST
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| A well written suicide poem. A very expressive poem; the poem says much with few words. |
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