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End Of The Rope?
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 06:53:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Gun pointed at his head, he is holding his breath. Knowing he'll be dead, he has no chances left.
His hands tied behind him, he can't get away. His chances of living are slim, because of today.
He never would have imagined, this happening in his life. As he cries out to the kidnapper, he has kids and a wife.
But they don't even listen, they just keep carrying on. Telling him to envision, his whole family being gone.
The kidnapper cocks the gun, and points it towards the man. Counts down from ten to one, and the man folds his hands.
He begins to pray aloud, God take care of my family. Please, please help them out, help them carry on without me.
Tears streaming down, heart beating fast. In the thought he wants to drown, knowing this moment is his last.
Life flashing before his eyes, thinking about past break ups. Screaming out i don't want to die, and then he wakes up.....
Copyright ©
Kay-Kay
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2005-04-13 18:53:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: End Of The Rope?
(User Rating: 1 ) by lost13 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 07:04:57 PM AEST (User
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at first i thought it was just another one of those sad steriotype poems. but i kept reading and then i changed my mind. it was really good. i would hate to have dream like that though. |
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Re: End Of The Rope?
(User Rating: 1 ) by JacobsKK on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:40:40 PM AEST (User
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Wow, that was really intense. It gave me goosebumps. Great job! |
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