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Silver Stiletto
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:23:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I find I was standing on unstable ground
My feet having given away
I cannot lose this misery I found
Dark and cold I will stay
Nothing can make me happy again
Ive lost interest in all of my life
No one can know, it feels like the end
I cant end this pain and this strife
I feel a pulsing inside my head
Screaming silently inside
And I feel Im already dead
In myself I will die
It seems it is time to let it all go
Let deaths grasp claim my life
Sometimes Im high, right now I am low
I tighten my grip on the knife
Im falling so fast through the abyss
Nothing for me to hold onto
Completely surrounded by such bliss
Nothing saves me from what Ive been through
Miles ago I passed the point of no return
And so forward I must continue
I cry at all my cuts and burns
And realize my happy moments are so few
This silver stiletto looks so good to me
A sharp tip punctures my fair skin
I push deeper, watching it bleed
Reminding me of what deep **** Im in
Frozen in pain am I forever now
It covers me like the winter frost
I wont get better, this I vow
I cant get back all that Ive lost
I drape my arms in the sink
I watch it fill with my own blood
And Im so out of it I cant think
All these emotions in my mind flood
So deep, so dark have I become
And this is my very last resort
I cant even remember where I come from
But my string of strength hangs so short
In my hand the silver stiletto lies
Waiting for me to use it again
And my bloodshot eyes look to the skies
Someone stop me is this the end?
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Re: Silver Stiletto
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by eXdreamer on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:51:40 PM AEST
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| I really like your poetry. It's so vivid. I hope you find some meaning and hope in your life. *sheds a tear* |
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Re: Silver Stiletto
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by spazz911 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:58:06 PM AEST
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oh jenny, i no y u feel like this, I understand, u want a meaning, well i'll give u one. ME
i am here i have known u 4 6yrs, dont u get that u r my sister my other half, w.o u jenny, i'd die so please keep me alive |
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Re: Silver Stiletto
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by MajesticPoet on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:11:08 PM AEST
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| I love the way you pour your emotions onto paper. I have been there, I have been so close to it. I have had the gun in my mouth. And flick one flinch and I would not be here typing this. I realized one thing in that one moment. I realized that I will not solve no problems, I would lose everything(what little I even had) for what? An act of nothing ness. I would not be remembered for anything other then "Remember James, Yeah poor guy killed himself" And that would be it. Move past it. Make a new path. Anyone can change their path. I did and I am still in a bit of a struggle but I love it and know I will overcome it. I am here if you ever want to talk! Keep your head up! |
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Re: Silver Stiletto
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by Jaycee on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:55:11 AM AEST
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| Jennie, my god, you say "someone stop me..." I haven't known you that long, but, please, please stop. Oh, how I don't want you to suffer. You know I've felt so down as to consider ending it all and it was your poem that made me think otherwise. You are stronger than you know, even if it doesn't feel like it right now. You were, and probably still are, a tether for me. Your poems, your messages, are a bright light that purge the darkness. I know I'm not the only one. I'm not saying you have to live for others, no live for yourself. The tide will turn, you will be up again. Stay alive! We love you and would miss you!!!!!!! |
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