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Self-Sincerity
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:19:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Prospective suddenly changes
For worthless life is unsacred
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Withering my the rotted roots
While uncaring for my life you created
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Fated hate is a pain to me
My nightmares have become my reality
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Air pumps into my leaded lungs
As my life is deemed heavy and unsung
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A parent you say you are
Though comfort only comes from you at a far
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A broken life like a torn piece of paper
Unstained of ink, and tattered of hatred
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Knowing why nothing works as a whole
A family torn apart by a leader of lost souls
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I HATE YOU!
For you are nothing to me!
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and I am nothing to you...
As my life is taken
In self-sincerity
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Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-04-13 22:19:31]
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Re: Self-Sincerity
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:28:10 PM AEST
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| excellent stanzas. and good ending. very creative. but you need to stop writing so well, i might become more jealous of your skills =] |
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Re: Self-Sincerity
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:47:13 PM AEST
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air pumps in my leaded lungs though I cant pick which part I liked the best because it was perfection all around very moving and powerful I love that in a poem I could feel you
Michelle |
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Re: Self-Sincerity
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:04:47 AM AEST
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Wow...
just wow...
This piece is amazing and stunning, I can relate to it so well, just as many others can, I'm sure...
Perfectly written, i loved it, especially now....
*walks off demurely to print*
~kt |
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Re: Self-Sincerity
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 06:27:00 PM AEST
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| very emotional, but in some places you try too hard to rhyme. not bad |
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