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When I Die
Contributed by
theeman
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Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 05:27:41 AM in AEST
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I hope that when i die
My spirit will fly
To this place called heaven
Where all my sins are forgiven
You are the one who created this world
Anyway thats what i heard
You can answer my question for you are wise
Before i live with you in paradise
Why did you create us in your mold
Why did you send us to this world
You are forgiving,i am told
Forgive me if i am too bold
Hear me o great one
Why did you create the sun
The planets and the moon
And days with morning,night and noon
O, god please tell me why
Hope you dont think i am sly
I am just very curious
So please dont get furious
I hope that he answers me
Then i will understand finally
Why we are here,you and me
In this world of mystery
Copyright ©
theeman
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2005-04-14 05:27:41]
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Re: When I Die
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 06:20:12 AM AEST
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| Very nice. Good questions, why put us here to watch us die? Shey |
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Re: When I Die
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:58:16 AM AEST
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A very well expressed and written piece of poetry. I loved the flow of the verses and the good questions asked. a great poem. Well done
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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