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What Am I To Do?
Contributed by
persia
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Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:41:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The atmosphere filled with the smoke you knew I knew you abused but still you found my stare
And still as night you abuse you couldnt really have a heart and hurt me like you hurt me and be like those that presume to know those things about me
What am I to do? anyone who had a heart could only see
You knew I knew... but still... What am I to do?
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2005-04-14 09:41:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What Am I To Do?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:07:01 AM AEST (User
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This is great work Persia, so much good poetry goes unnoticed on this site work that deserve more reads and comments. This one is up there! excellent.
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Re: What Am I To Do?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby1987 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:13:52 PM AEST (User
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if u knew dat he knew den ur js stupid!
but... gd poem though i like da uv written it! |
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Re: What Am I To Do?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:18:58 PM AEST (User
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it is so heart at times to understand why another breaks our heart, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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