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Love You More
Contributed by
JacobsKK
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Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Its the times I hear you laugh,
That make me sure I love you more.
Times you hold me up,
When Im about to hit the floor.
The times I see you smile,
Then try to lie and say you dont.
Times I want to play with you,
Even though you wont.
The times I see you cry,
And use my hands to feel your tears.
The times you are so close to me,
And yet, I want you nearer.
I know I love you more,
Just by how much youre on my mind.
And also by how close we get
So tangledintertwined.
And the times I hear you laugh,
The laugh that makes me giggle too.
Is the same laugh that reminds me,
Of how much more my heart loves you.
See, you think you love me more,
And I feel bad for trying to compete.
But the truth is, Baby, you dont even know.
I am SO head over feet.
My love for you is crazy.
A kind of love that you can taste.
A love that people envy,
One that I wont ever waste.
A love thats greater than all the oceans,
But still has room in store.
And its all the things you do,
That make me sure I love you more.
Copyright ©
JacobsKK
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2005-04-14 19:09:25]
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Re: Love You More
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:16:01 PM AEST
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| you have explained the feeling perfectly, amazing and sweetly written. Great job. |
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Re: Love You More
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 11:38:03 PM AEST
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This is cheerful in it's presentation i feel the
positve vibes a very beautiful peice of
poetry . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Love You More
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by Jzarmel on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2010 @ 06:41:55 AM AEST
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| nice piece |
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