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Third Shoulder
Contributed by
JacobsKK
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:14:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like A bed that I can fall on,
So I dont fully hit the ground.
Like a person I can talk to,
When theres no one else around.
Like a rock that does some damage,
When I cant do it myself.
Like a joke that births some smiles,
When fake ones no longer help.
Like an instant friend and listener,
When I feel like Im alone.
Like a third shoulder I can lean on,
When I cannot use my own.
Youre so many extra things,
When I run out of what is mine.
An extra day or two,
When my own clock runs out of time.
Youre like a shoulder I take with me,
Every single place I go.
So that if my own arent strong enough,
I still will not hang low.
Always there prepared to fight,
When Im to scared to fight for myself.
Like nothing I have known before,
Nothing Ive ever felt.
Whenever I try to be everything,
That you always are for me.
I get lost and turned around,
And you put me back where I need to be.
Ive failed at all the attempts
Of being your third shoulder so far.
Everything I want to be for you,
Is something you already are.
Copyright ©
JacobsKK
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2005-04-14 19:14:49]
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Re: Third Shoulder
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:22:00 PM AEST
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This is such a sweet and adorable write. Absolutely beautiful. Its captivating from the first line to the last, written wonderfully and flows smoothly. I love it. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Third Shoulder
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by Kay-Kay on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 03:15:39 PM AEST
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Great poem, i really enjoyed it, i like your writing style it sort of matches mine, very good write, keep it up!
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Re: Third Shoulder
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by Jzarmel on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2010 @ 06:43:16 AM AEST
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nice
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