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SHADES OF NIGHTMARE
Contributed by
Alexander_McDonald
on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Broken shadows,
Of the night.
Broken halos,
Of pure light.
Broken knives,
Have teeth that bite.
Broken parts,
That fit not right.
Broken lives,
From the fight.
Broken hearts,
Squeezed shut tight.
Broken thoughts,
You cannot keep.
Broken dreams,
Of nightmare.
Broken plots,
In your sleep.
Broken screams,
Come out of there.
Angel of death.
Demons breath.
Breathing down your neck.
Need some air.
But it's hard to care,
When you've been dead,
Beat.
Look to the sky,
Wish to fly.
But you wear shoes of concrete.
Look at the Sun.
Curse the one,
That gives you heat.
Slit your throat to free your head.
Don't become one of the living dead.
Copyright 1993 by Alexander McDonald
All rights reserved.
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Re: SHADES OF NIGHTMARE
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 03:19:34 PM AEST
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| Its alittle hard to understand but I really like it alot. It was nicely written. |
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Re: SHADES OF NIGHTMARE
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by OreO on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 05:02:11 PM AEST
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Oh beautiful this is....Don't become one of the living dead this is such a beautiful write i enjoyed this one alot....i love the last line....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: SHADES OF NIGHTMARE
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 01:29:47 AM AEST
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Dear Alexander @-<-
Excellent. Loved it.
always Nessa |
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Re: SHADES OF NIGHTMARE
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by Necronomy on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 01:17:53 AM AEST
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| i know what you are saying here. cool poem, i agree with a lot of it. |
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