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Living On The Edge
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:18:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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All my life I have lived on the edge,
Forever jumping over Satans hedge,
Looking over my shoulder scared,
In case I ever saw him standing there.
You have no friends living in hell,
I have known this & I know it too well,
Down here you are all alone,
Into your mind his seeds full grown.
He taints you beyond recognition,
To steal your soul is his premonition,
Drinking you in bit by bit,
Driving you to the end of sanitys wit.
You cant help but fall into his trap,
He has set you up to take evils wrap,
He calls & he knows you will answer,
Over your grave hell be the dancer.
Dancing to the death of your soul,
Leaving you with only demons to console,
They whisper darkness into your ear,
Nothing in his world to you seems clear.
He takes away all your humanity,
Speaking all wickedness & profanity,
To be on the edge is to live in the dark,
& onto your soul Lucifer has left his mark.
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pixie
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Re: Living On The Edge
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by Xsitm on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:31:16 PM AEST
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One of the best poems I have read in a while.
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Re: Living On The Edge
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:38:42 PM AEST
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wow this is a wicked write
throughouly enjoyed it |
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Re: Living On The Edge
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:43:37 PM AEST
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| There's a lot of feeling in this poem. I hope life is going fine for you. It's sortof sad, but a great write. Jenny |
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Re: Living On The Edge
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 11:19:04 PM AEST
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This was a wonderious journey into poetry
that sweeps one away, beautiful pixie as only
you can create . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Living On The Edge
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by venkat on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:04:34 AM AEST
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"Dancing to the death of your soul,
Leaving you with only demons to console,
They whisper darkness into your ear,
Nothing in his world to you seems clear"
Chillingly beautiful..though it speaks the pathos of life..hugs my dear girl:-) venkat
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