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Self Centered Death
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:45:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This darkened heart
Sleeps deep inside
Supposedly a part
Of what I have failed to find
These broken bones
Buried beneath the skin
The pieces unsewn
Of a life driven to end
This stolen soul
Exempt from my essence
Unallowing me to grow
And voiding my existance
These marred memories
That have never left
What finally sucumbed me
And what I now regret
...
My self centered death
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-04-14 21:45:53]
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Re: Self Centered Death
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:51:03 PM AEST
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well done...powerful poem as ur poems always are
nice imagery and i love the line
"This darkened heart
Sleeps deep inside'
I LOVED READING THIS |
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Re: Self Centered Death
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by Tru2Myself on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:10:44 PM AEST
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Wow! This was amazing! I love your use of ryming. Its not overdone. Great job! I LOVE THE LAST LINE!
Lauren |
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Re: Self Centered Death
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:38:57 PM AEST
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| ah excellent post clark, im glad to have read this one. from the first line to the last this was an enjoyment to read. excellent word usage =] |
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Re: Self Centered Death
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 02:54:57 AM AEST
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This was such a pleasure to read, Clark!
Very dark imagery, and yes, awesome word usage....
Some very powerful lines in there, keep it up ;)
~kt |
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