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A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning )
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:37:09 AM in AEST
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I cant vocalize what I feel
It builds up in me
And it chokes me till I cant breath
You are everything to me
You are more than anyone of my dreams have shown me
You are more than what heaven can show me
You are how I know that magic is real
Its how I feel when I hear your voice
Nothing has felt as good as me
As good as I do when I hear you say you love me
Just that is worth more than anything to me
But you give me so much more
You are like a song no one can sing
The words are like chasms of meaning
I cant vocalize what I feel
It builds up in me
And it chokes me till I cant breath
You are everything to me
I would go through everything I have
If in the end I would meet you again
I would willingly go through all the torments and pain
I would willingly wear all my shackles and restraints
Nothing in this world could keep me from you
You are so overwhelming to me
To much to take in at once
All your beauty, grace and charms
They all make me want you in my arms
Thats why I want you for always
I want to be yours for always
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Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning )
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:43:06 AM AEST
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Another good write, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning )
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:43:14 AM AEST
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Nothing has felt as good as me
As good as I do when I hear you say you love me
Just that is worth more than anything to me
But you give me so much more
you are so sweet :) |
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Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning )
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:04:09 AM AEST
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Ah,....even if you wouldnt have said you wrote this after hearing vermillion1/2.....I would have totally called you on it...some of the lines..(alot actually) are near copies added to your remix of the song....Very well done my friend....cant blame you for remixing greatness....;]
Clark |
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Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning )
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:26:53 AM AEST
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A nicely written poem. Beautiful and sweet.
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning )
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:51:45 PM AEST
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| Ooo that one was purty and it made me very jealous... |
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