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Suffering heart
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:21:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My heart seethes with rage it cuts to the skin That life would be cruel to one I call kin
The angel of blue for her I do care and forces of darkness take me on if you dare
Why do you torture her suffering heart Why must you tear her poor life apart
What has she done that you treat her so rough You cannot win she is amazingly tough
Malevolent forces whose actions are mean Keep your hands off this gal of fifteen
Show ME your fury and I will not bend I'll rip you apart I'll tear and I'll rend
My swords are so sharp I'll cleave you in half My weapons are real so don't even laugh
Our group is a family this much is true Leave her alone or I'll destroy you
Oh, angel of blue you we do need don't let them win this I do plead
Know this you evil Know I won't rest And beat you she will she will pass the test
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-04-15 06:21:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Suffering heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by blue_angel on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:41:03 PM AEST (User
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again, you find a way to make me smile. when no one seems to care (with a few exceptions), you write these poems that just... make me feel loved. thank you so much!
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Re: Suffering heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:14:48 PM AEST (User
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Awww JC..this is so very touching.... I love it.. as I'm sure Jennie does also.... This just goes to show what a caring man you are....
Crazy Jenni |
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