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So She Wept...
Contributed by
LostandBroken
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:44:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In the darkness she wept
For the loss of her soul
The hatered had killed her
Had loosend her whole
Through the night she slipped
Like an old dirty puddle
Under the stars
Leaving herself
Roaming the land
Ignoring the light
Her body had rotted
And she had nearly forgot
She could never know love
Not now and not ever
As skin turned to bones
And the pale moon rose
So wept the girl
Who had lost her soul
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LostandBroken
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2005-04-15 09:44:36]
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Re: So She Wept...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:06:57 AM AEST
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| Sad poem. Good though. Shey |
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Re: So She Wept...
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by vox on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 01:53:49 PM AEST
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| sad indeed. but yet beautiful in its own little special way. well done! |
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Re: So She Wept...
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 12:33:55 AM AEST
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| You have a great poem here. I think people have missed out on reading it. It is a great tribute to the lonely heart. |
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Re: So She Wept...
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by Anesthetic on
Tuesday, 26th February 2008 @ 03:29:59 PM AEST
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Sad write but well worth the read:)
keep up the good work!!
~Charli~ |
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