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always
Contributed by
haligh
on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i wonder how could anyone be as beautiful as you
as i stare at you while you rest your head on my lap
i was once the girl who was so lucky to have you to myself
i was once the girl you kissed, once the girl you loved
stare into my eyes and say your feelings are "just friends"
do you honestly think it will ever end? i'll never give you up
you promised me we'd never end and that you'd always love me
but promises were broken and always is shorter than i thought
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haligh
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2002-12-23 03:00:00]
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Re: always
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by OreO on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 05:48:39 PM AEST
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I think what made this poem so deep was where it said but promises were broken and always is shorter than i thought.....that was a good write....even if it was written quickly as you say i enjoyed it alot....thanks for sharing this one...
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Re: always
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 12:18:22 PM AEST
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| Once again, a poem so full of emotion.....but that line "Always is shorter than I thought.".........outstanding!! Larry |
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