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All For You
Contributed by
GurlyTye
on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:02:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I lay down to sleep,
I close my eyes
and breath deep.
My heart beats
All for you.
I dream of a happy tomorrow,
a sweet paradise
A world with out sorrow.
All with you.
My souls desire,
a beautiful fantisy
of loves fire
All in you.
My world is complete,
peacefull and content.
Love is so sweet
All with you.
To you i give this vow,
Love, desire, and bliss
Forever starts now
All for you.
Copyright ©
GurlyTye
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2005-04-15 13:02:29]
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Re: All For You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 02:10:17 PM AEST
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I like this Tye ... willin to bet someone else does too * winks* ... Still need an eye on spelling and grammar ... A suggestion ... type them into word first ... then copy and paste to post ... you will loose alot of the errors that way and you won't discourage your readers with obvious mistakes ...
Nazmythian ~
( you can also allow the moderators to correct spelling, but I think it would mean more if you did it on your own ) |
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Re: All For You
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by sride686 on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 03:08:01 PM AEST
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| another beautiful poem. I wish I could write of love like this, but at this time in my life my mind wont let me feel love like this. I’ve been hurt to bad by love but I know I’ll heal and learn to love again. I'm going to add you to my buddy list so I can find your work as you write more. Again thank you and write again......Steve |
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Re: All For You
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:07:00 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem, it's simple and yet you're words were just perfection.
I loved it, thanks for sharing.
Jane |
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