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Confused Thoughts
Contributed by
GurlyTye
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:08:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Very close, but apart at the same time.
Mom stays gone, friends in disguise.
Tears hidden deep with in the eyes,
Always wondering what the ***** is life?
Wanna give up, but staying strong.
Asking myself what the ***** I did wrong?
Was it something I said,
Or what I told.
Thats something Ill never know.
Its hidden deep within the sorrow.
Copyright ©
GurlyTye
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2005-04-15 17:08:33]
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Re: Confused Thoughts
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by GurlyTye on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:09:58 PM AEST
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| the authors note cut off. Nazmythian worte a poem called " Saving Grace" The girl that poem is about wrote this poem |
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Re: Confused Thoughts
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:47:11 PM AEST
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Tye ... be sure to let Grace know ... anytime ... anytime she needs it ... she has adoptive family that will always be there for her. And we give the bestest hugs ever ... we can even turn off the fans for her safety, and pad the doors, walls, and any other potentially detrimental surface. But we'd gladly do it for her ... just be sure she knows ... ok. Luv ya Tye, and you too Grace.
Papa ~
( sorry T ... I couldn't not on that one ) |
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Re: Confused Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:15:41 PM AEST
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| I'm sure all the friends here at YPDC send their hugs. I know I do. Hope she feels better soon. Life is confusing, but if you keep going, it *does* get better. This was a caring write. J. |
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Re: Confused Thoughts
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 03:32:17 AM AEST
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| This is another good work girl. It has a lot of emotion and you say it with so few words. Some of the best poems are short and really show talent to show so much emotion in so few words. The last two lines were a great ending and really griped me as I read. Good work on this poem as well and thank you for sharing it…..Steve |
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Re: Confused Thoughts
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by sride686 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:49:51 AM AEST
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| I've read this poem about 3 times now but never commented on it don't ask me why. But it is a good piece of work. their are so many times I ask myself what is the point of life but yes we do stay strong and make it through these times. Thank you for your heart in soul that you put in these words.....Steve |
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